Collaboration ahoy

From Q, to whom I apologize for being a slowpoke.

Time to write a poem.

Here's how it goes:

I start a poem with a single line. Then, each of you adds a line in the comments. You don't have to be a poet, and your line doesn't have to be brilliant--it's just a few words, after all. You don't need to copy and paste the lines before it into your comment, either. All you need to do is make sure it fits with the preceding lines.

I'll close comments and put the lines together in a day or two, putting in a last line if necessary, then post the poem with the linked names of people who participated (so don't be anonymous, either!).

Ready? Here's the line:

I am a little stiller around the edges

13 comments:

Emma 24/12/09 10:26 AM  

Shift-shaping on the inside

Q 24/12/09 10:52 AM  

now that you are gone from

Priya 24/12/09 11:10 AM  

the place where frost

Maya Ganesan 24/12/09 12:01 PM  

reaches out

Summermoon 24/12/09 12:25 PM  

The days overflow quickly

Cassandra 24/12/09 6:52 PM  

as you kiss me too much

Noël De Vries 24/12/09 7:05 PM  

goodbye

faithfullyme 24/12/09 8:19 PM  

as the waves whisper against my toes

R. 24/12/09 9:28 PM  

I wander through the wonder

Alla 24/12/09 11:42 PM  

wanting more

Erin 25/12/09 2:09 PM  

almost tasting a thrill

Every time it rains she just feels a lot better... 26/12/09 6:45 AM  

skipping over it like stones on water

cuileann 28/12/09 12:13 AM  

I think that's an excellent ending, so I shall close the comments now.

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